Wednesday, 4 June 2014

Plan/Start of script:


Plan:

•       Wife (Femme Fatal) Ellythea sees her husband Mikayla with another woman Isla , out in public, holding hands.
•       Wife Ellythea pretends to be husband Mikayla and invites mistress Isla over by phone
•       Mistress comes to husbands apartment unaware of the femme fatale. She is shocked to see the femme fatale waiting for her in the apartment instead of the husband
•       Wife Ellythea kills the mistress Isla, strangled…seen in reflection
•       Witness Alex walks in on other woman Isla being strangled by wife Ellythea
•       Wife Ellythea convinces witness Alex to not tell anyone the husband what she has seen
•       Body is found by detective Serena,
•       Detective Serena integrates husband Mikayla, wife Ellythea and witness Alex about the murder
•       Wife Ellythea and witness Alex blame it on the husband Mikayla.


Characters:
1.      Ellythea Wahlstrom is - femme fatale
2.      Serena Vanstone is - the detective
3.      Alex Elliot is - the witness and the “side” guy
4.      Mikayla Kersten is - the husband


Script:

Husband and Mistress: Sitting at cafe holding hands and laughing with one another

Femme Fatale: watches through the windows of the cafe then turns to walk away

Femme fatale: arrives home through the front door (now night time), looks around the room and dials the mistresses number and invites her over

Mistress: comes through the door to the husband and femme fatales apartment to see the femme fatale waiting on the lounge for her arrival

Femme fatale: walks over to the mistress and begins strangling her (seen in the shadows of the wall)

-    mistress drops to the floor dead -

Witness: comes through the door to see the mistress dead on the floor (worked with the husband and explains how he was only there to pick up files for work) “I-I’m sorry - I just needed to pick up some files for work”

Femme fatale: tricks the witness into keeping quiet about what he saw and asks him to help move the body

Detective: comes to look for clues of the murder (since she knew the husband he…

Detective: … interrogates the husband, wife and witness about the murder. Sits them all down in the same room at separate times
-    To femme fatale: “Where were you last night at 11pm?”
-    “Were you aware of the relationship your husband had with this woman?”

Femme fatale: “No, i had no idea. Last night at 11pm I was at home, pouring myself a glass of wine to ease the long day of work.”

Detective: To husband
-    “Where were you last night at 11pm?”
-    “When was the last time you saw her?”
-    “Did your wife know about the relationship you had with her?”

Husband: “I was at the office, working late… The last time i saw her was when I met her at the cafe to talk. She didn't know about us, theres no way she could find out anyways.”

Detective: To witness
- “Where were you last night at 11pm?”
-    “Did you know your boss was cheating on his wife?”

Witness: “Uh no, I had no idea he would do this. He loves his wife! Last night at 11… I went home to pick up some files for work…”



*We could have flashbacks of what they are “supposedly” doing at this time whilst their voice plays over the top*

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